tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105484029086078203.post7665669642940166190..comments2014-01-30T09:51:34.882-08:00Comments on Camerong2017: PLN 5Cameron Gardnerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17883564888962896239noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105484029086078203.post-69840322628458608882013-11-08T07:52:51.532-08:002013-11-08T07:52:51.532-08:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105484029086078203.post-72682940002630739842013-10-21T08:09:46.457-07:002013-10-21T08:09:46.457-07:00Christopher- good start to your summary, but it is...Christopher- good start to your summary, but it isn't as well polished as your other pieces. Make sure to proofread as some of your sentences don't make sense. Your topic sentence is good, but the sentences that follow are needing some attention.<br /><br />You begin with a good topic sentence in your response, but once again, some of your points and sentences are hard to understand. I am not sure what you are trying to prove. Rework this piece.<br /><br />7 Anne K. Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04110214058375361749noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6105484029086078203.post-24092466542356506522013-10-11T07:58:39.374-07:002013-10-11T07:58:39.374-07:00Good eye contact. I thought you did a good job of ...Good eye contact. I thought you did a good job of moving the subject along.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com